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Stuff-your-own Sandwich by *kickass-peanut:iconkickass-peanut:

Categories Artisan Crafts > Dolls, Plushies & Custom Toys > Plushies

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This was a test for a stuff-your-own sandwich idea...

Quite pleased with it but I think it needs crusts and I don't know wether to put faces on the lettuce/cheese/meat or not?

Requesting Critique on this, but please note I would like advice and constructive feedback, not snotty, snipey comments for the sake of it, thankyou. Help me improve on this idea.

I think I'll make a few of these with different fillings like peanut butter and jelly, cheese and pickle, all-day breakfast etc....

this one is ham and cheese salad.

for sale if anyone is interested

*SOLD*
Edition: Prototype
Size: 18cm high approx
Price: Uk £13.50 Elsewhere £15.00
This is including postage

More coming soon, having read the comments and critique, I think I know how to improve the new versions , THANKYOU TO EVERYONE WHO CONTRIBUTED!

Critiques


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*No-Dogs-Allowed Jul 8, 2009, 5:42:18 PM
I think it's really cute, but I do agree that it could do with crusts and that faces on ALL the fillings. It'd be gilding the lily a little bit.

I'm interested to know what you've used to make the fillings. I only ask because I've made a couple plushie burgers in felt and I found I had to do a blanket stitch around each filling just to make it a little more durable.

Other than that I think this is a great design.

Other fillings could be a rasher of bacon, an egg, peanut butter and jelly, a little sardine, some swiss cheese. The possibilites are endless :D
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=TwistedAlice Jul 8, 2009, 7:55:48 AM
I agree on the rest of the people, I think crusts would look better on this but the fillings don't need any faces on, as this will detract from the cuteness of the bread.

Overall I think this is a great design, just needs the crusts. You could do different types of bread, like wholemeal with the bits in. How are you attaching the two pieces of bread together, as its not that clear in the picture?

You could even do different faces on the bread that might link to the fillings, maybe a little bit of jam on the lips so it looks like the bread had nibbled itself? Or even some bread with some bites out of it!

(side note, hope I got this right for a crit thing!)
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*XxViolentxLolitaxX Jul 8, 2009, 7:03:39 AM
Awww cute~!

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=-jenni- Jul 8, 2009, 7:03:51 AM
I dont think you need faces on the insides, but he definatly needs a bit of crust. :nod: Great work!

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~Flappiez Jul 8, 2009, 7:08:59 AM
I want it!!! :iconwantplz:
Its so cute!

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*kickass-peanut Jul 8, 2009, 7:09:41 AM
Thanks, Glad you agree.....this one can just be a crustless one :P for a fussy person.

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~mAd-ArIsToCrAt Jul 8, 2009, 7:10:55 AM
It's really cute! I agree that having a crust would be better, but you don't need faces on the meat and veggies. They'll be inside anyways right? :D

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~kunoichi-kari Jul 8, 2009, 7:21:17 AM
The crust is definitely needed, because without it, it kinda looks like a burrito or something.

Other than that, it's a great idea.

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~natalia-factory Jul 8, 2009, 7:22:02 AM
my life is so yummy well done ^.^

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~lydiaicywolf25 Jul 8, 2009, 7:24:58 AM
I want it *grabs from computer* :la: :meow: :tea: :toast:

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~neko-crafts Jul 8, 2009, 7:28:50 AM
yeah defo some crusts, but you dont have to sew crusts on just lightlik colour the fabric with pastels.. simular to the pastel in clay method. would make it look more.. bready :giggle: it still looks great tho :3

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~neko-crafts Jul 8, 2009, 7:30:12 AM
also maybe velcro or poppers to stop the sandwich falling appart and loosing the pieces :3

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